The Witch King novel is a fantasy novel written by author H.E. Edgmon. The novel follows the story of Wyatt Croft, a transgender witch. Set in a world where magic and witchcraft exist, Wyatt must navigate his new life as a witch while also dealing with his own identity and the prejudices of others. The novel explores themes of gender identity, self-discovery, and the power of acceptance.
BIASES STATED
After being murdered, his consciousness dormant and unaware of the passing of time while confined in an elaborate water trap, Kai wakes to find a lesser mage attempting to harness Kai s magic to his own advantage. I couldn t do that in Witch King because I had a hard time grounding myself in the story; I was often left confused about what exactly was going on and why exactly it was happening.
The novel explores themes of gender identity, self-discovery, and the power of acceptance. Wyatt's journey is not just about mastering his witchcraft abilities, but also about learning to embrace who he truly is and challenging the societal norms that seek to define him. As the Witch King, Wyatt faces many challenges and obstacles along the way.
A Critique of 'Witch King' by Martha Wells
I got a copy of this audiobook for free from the publisher for the purpose of an honest review.
This book was fun! If I were to describe this book, it's a combination of Carol Berg's Rai-Kirah series and Steven Erikson's Malazan series. This book stars the eponymous Witch King Kai, in two timelines. In the past, he leads a rebellion against oppressive death wizards. In the present, he's trying to discover who betrayed him.
While this book didn't knock my socks off, I do think this book will end up in the top 10 books I read this year. I suggest you read this book, but enter reading this with your expectations relatively in check. This book isn't as spectacular a start to a series as Murderbot.
WHAT IS THE TARGET AUDIENCE? WHAT GENRES? WHAT MAJOR TROPES?
- Adult, but I think anyone older than 14 can read this.
- Demon protagonist who jumps between bodies
- Life-energy and death magic
- Dual timeline, past and present. Friends in the past are potentially enemies in the present
- Non-European inspired setting. (I think I remember the characters eating teff, so I think this is loosely inspired by a central African setting? I could be remembering it wrong.)
MY EMOTIONAL RESPONSE/FUN FACTOR
I had fun reading this, and I read it quickly. This book throws you right into the plot, with minimal exposition explaining worldbuilding. I enjoyed it as a relatively short pallet cleanser novel (432 pages or 13 hours audiobook) to read between bigger books. It was well written, it's prose lush, it was sharply paced, and the worldbuilding was enthralling.
If I were to make a complaint about this book, this felt like book 2 in a series. Specifically, we didn't get to know the characters like you usually do with book 1 in a series. I finished the book and the characters felt somewhat like strangers.
My favorite part of the book was the lived-in feeling of the setting and how the two timelines interacted with one another. In the past, Kai seems like a much more innocent person than he does in the present. In the past, we see the heroes interacting with one another as friends, but in the present the heroes treat one another with suspicion because they were betrayed by one of their number and they don't know who the betrayer is.
WARNING! QUIT READING NOW UNTIL YOU FINISH READING THE BOOK!
BIASES STATED
To put this review/study in proper context, you must know my starting point.
I've read a few of this author's books and stories before. I read book 1 of Raksura, and didn't love it. I read the first Murderbot book, and enjoyed it. I read some of the author's MtG IP fiction, and thought she did a fine job.
I also read a handful of reviews for 'Witch King', and I'm grateful that I did. I enjoyed this novel all the more because this book exceeded the expectations those reviews left me with. This was a good book after all.
SIMILAR BOOKS/OTHER BOOKS IN THE SERIES
- ‘Transformation’ by Carol Berg
- ‘Malazan: ‘The Gardens of the Moon” Book Review
- ‘The Curse of Chalion’ by Lois McMaster Bujold
CONCEPT AND EXECUTION
This book's concept was as a dual-timeline narrative, with the heroes in the past teaming up to defeat a great evil, while in the present they are at one another's throats. To summarize, the heroes defeated the Dark Lord(s) in the past timeline, and in the present timeline the heroes replaced the Dark Lord(s) and now squabble over the rubble of the Lord's kingdom. In the present, the book begins with Kai escaping a prison a past-friend trapped him in, and Kai has no idea which past-friend put him there. All he knows is that he's going to get revenge. This was a great concept.
This book was well executed upon, but it could have been better. I don't say this very often, but this book could have been a good 70~100 pages longer. I wanted to spend more time with these characters, I wanted to see more of the magic, I wanted to explore this world and it's civilizations more. I feel like the dual-timeline narrative resulted in us not having enough of either timeline. This is a good problem to have; it's usually good to leave the reader wanting more.
CHARACTERS, CHARACTERIZATION AND DIALOG
This is the weakest part of this story. As I said above, I finished this book and the protagonists were still basically strangers to me. This book was very plot-forward. We never saw the protagonists in contexts outside of moving the plot forward. This book was all business, no pleasure.
Everything the characters do was meant to advance the plot, and it gave both timelines a frenetic energy. But this fast pacing deprived the book of a slower, more nuanced characterization of the protagonists. I left this book understanding the events surrounding Kai, but not understanding who Kai is. Does he like tea? What's his favorite book? What's his favorite color? These questions are individually unimportant, but they hint at a greater truth; this book was stripped to the bone to provide a lean story without any 'fluff.' Consequently Kai, and everyone else, are somewhat enigmas. Some fluff is good!
To be clear, these aren't bad characters; I found Kai to be compelling. They just weren't developed here. I hope this book gets a sequel, I want to get more from this series.
PACING AND STRUCTURE
And this is arguably this book's strongest aspect. This book is FAST PACED. As stated, this book has frenetic energy. It's FAST PACED, and eminently readable. I found this book as easy to consume as crackers or candy or chocolate.
Structurally, here's a breakdown.
- With his family on the grasslands
- In captivity before the rebellion
- the rebellion
- Fleeing the palace of the hierarchs, and becoming fast friends
- Waking up in his tomb, and stealing a new body
- Freeing the whale and talking to grandma
- Stealing the boat, and speaking with the Blessed Immortal
- Returning to where he was held in captivity decades before
- Fight scenes with the conspiracy
- Returning to civilization, and finding the true traitor
On a chapter-by-chapter level, the author integrated the two timelines by going a chapter in the past, then the present, then the past again. This strategy worked, but I think it wasn't ideal. I felt a tiny bit of friction whenever the story alternated between chapters and timelines, between past and present. Whenever we change chapters/timelines, it took me a moment to remember what the plotline was in this different timeline. Having this source of friction happen at the beginning of every chapter wasn't a big deal, but it did hamper my suspension of disbelief somewhat.
I personally feel it would have been better if the story batched together several chapters in the past, then several chapters in the present, then back to the past. That would have relieved that narrative friction.
PLOT, STAKES AND TENSION
No spoilers about the plot. I thought the plot was very well done.
The stakes and tension worked REALLY WELL in the past. Kai was young and unskilled and innocent in the past, and he had a lot more to lose in the past. Due to his weakness and having so much to lose, the past felt much more serious and dangerous than the present. That's great stakes and tension. The stakes and tension in the present wasn't as well established as it was in the past.
AUTHORIAL VOICE (TONE, PROSE AND THEME)
I enjoyed the author's narrative voice. I like books which have a somewhat lush, descriptive style, focusing on the texture of life. For example, describing what a flower smells like, or what food tastes like. This book is such a story, describing everything from food to the art on the walls to people's clothing. Now that said, the lush style never delved into being purple.
The story's tone was serious, but never delved into being grimdark. The main bad guys uses death magic which kills a ton of people at a time, however that's the limit of it. There's no gore, or assault, or anything grim like that.
SETTING, WORLDBUILDING AND ORIGINALITY
The setting was lush, with multiple magic systems interacting with multiple cultures. The grasslands culture uses demons like Kai, there are witches who use elemental magics, the Immortal Blessed culture create magical artifacts, while the antagonist hierarchs use death magic. This was really good worldbuiling by the author, because it gave the different cultures a different texture for worldbuilding each; by getting to know the magic systems, you get to know the culture behind each one.
For example, the Blessed culture view themselves as pious and righteous due to the divine nature of their magic, but everyone else views their culture as pretentious and annoying due to how snooty their are. Another example would be demon magic; other cultures view the grassland culture as evil because they consort with demons, however the grassland culture view demons as something like Unseelie fairies- useful and dangerous, and you can marry them and form alliances with them.
Additionally, the setting isn't just a re-creation of earth. Some of the animals are NOT earth animals, like the massive wallwalkers who are domesticated beasts of burden (which sometimes eat people) or the Frankenstein-like ghoul creatures the blood magic sorcerers can create. And the characters wear non-earth clothing, like the veils the magic-user wear or the golden robes of the magically powerful hierarchs.
AUDIOBOOK NOTES
I listened to the audiobook, and it was great. The protagonist is the 'Witch King' mention in the title. I felt that the narrator did a good job of adding a bit of regal dignity to the narration. If this book sounds good to you, try out the audiobook, the narrator is Eric Mok.
LESSONS LEARNED
As an author, I want to improve my own writing/editing skills. To that end, I like to learn lessons from every story I read. Here's what I learned from this story:
- Link up your fantasy worldbuilding of magic with culture. For example, in this book the Immortal Blessed culture used divine magic to create magical artifacts. They view themselves as the natural rulers of the world, and consider themselves pious and just. Everyone else thinks of them as faux-rightous oppressors. This is GREAT worldbuilding, linking culture to magic to characters.
- This was a dual-timeline novel, and it divvied up the timeline by going chapter 1:present, then chapter 2: past, then 3:present, and so on/so forth. I think this strategy wasn't as good as bundling chapters into larger sections. For example, chapters 1 through 4: present, chapters 5 through 8:past, chapters 9 through 12: present.
Here's a link to all the lessons I've previously learned.
SUMMARY
This is a good story. I enjoyed it as a palate cleanser between larger novels. It has strong worldbuilding, pacing and plot. I thought the characters were pleasant to read, but a bit blank slates. I hope there's a series following this book, this setting and characters are interesting.
Did you like this critique/review? Here are some more: The Rest of My In Depth Reviews
On a personal note, I'm open to editing books. I don't like putting myself out here like this, but I've been told I should. Check my blog for details if interested.
He must confront both external threats and internal struggles as he battles against dark forces and seeks to uncover the truth about his own past. Along the way, he forms alliances, forges new friendships, and discovers unexpected powers within himself. The Witch King novel is a compelling and thought-provoking read. It delves into complex issues surrounding gender, identity, and self-acceptance, offering readers a unique and diverse perspective on the traditional fantasy genre. Through its rich world-building and engaging characters, the novel provides a captivating story that will leave readers eagerly awaiting the next installment. H.E. Edgmon has created a vivid and imaginative world in The Witch King novel, filled with magical creatures, ancient prophecies, and epic battles. At its core, however, the novel is a deeply personal and emotional journey of self-discovery. It challenges societal norms and encourages readers to embrace their true selves, no matter the obstacles they may face. Overall, The Witch King novel is a must-read for fans of fantasy and those interested in exploring themes of identity and acceptance. It is a powerful and important addition to the genre, and one that will leave a lasting impact on its readers..
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1. Emma - 2/5 stars - I had high hopes for "The Witch King" novel, but unfortunately, it fell short of my expectations. The plot was slow-moving, and it felt like nothing significant was happening for the majority of the book. The characters lacked depth and failed to engage me emotionally. Overall, I found it difficult to connect with the story, and it left me feeling unsatisfied.
2. John - 1/5 stars - "The Witch King" was an absolute disappointment. The writing style was convoluted and confusing, making it hard to follow the narrative. The world-building was underdeveloped, leaving me with more questions than answers. Additionally, the dialogue felt forced and unnatural, lacking authenticity. I struggled to stay invested in the story and ended up feeling extremely let down by the overall execution.
3. Sarah - 2/5 stars - I found "The Witch King" to be a tedious read. The pacing was incredibly slow, and the story lacked any real excitement or suspense. The characters were one-dimensional and lacked any significant growth throughout the novel. The saving grace was the premise, which had potential, but unfortunately, it wasn't enough to salvage the overall lackluster storytelling. Overall, I would not recommend this book to those seeking an engaging fantasy read.
4. Michael - 2/5 stars - "The Witch King" was a book that failed to captivate me. The plot felt disjointed and hard to follow, with many loose ends left unresolved. The author introduced too many unnecessary characters, making it difficult to form a connection with any of them. The story lacked a clear direction and left me feeling confused and unfulfilled. I was left with more questions than answers and ultimately found the reading experience lackluster.