Exploring the Magical World of Silvester and the Pbelpe

Once upon a time, in a small village called Silvester, there lived a young boy named Peter. Peter was an adventurous and curious child who loved exploring the woods near his village. One sunny afternoon, while Peter was wandering deeper into the forest, he stumbled upon an old, mysterious book hidden beneath a pile of fallen leaves. Intrigued by the sight of the ancient book, Peter cautiously picked it up, wiping off the dust that had settled on its cover. The book seemed to radiate an aura of magic and intrigue, captivating Peter's attention immediately. With great excitement, he delved into the pages, curious to uncover its secrets.

With great excitement, he delved into the pages, curious to uncover its secrets. To his astonishment, the book revealed tales of a magical creature known as a pbelpe. According to the legends, the pbelpe possessed the ability to grant wishes to those who were pure of heart and believed in the power of magic.

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For as long as Jason can remember, he has been a killer. Raised as a child soldier, he was trained in the arts of murder as a mercenary, an assassin, and a bodyguard. In short, his life was anything but dull. Yet his greatest wish was to live a normal life. Go to school, date a normal girl, have a moment to breathe and relax. His wish was to be a normal boy, no, a real boy and not some weapon. But his thirst for strength led him to the path of both the scientifically psychic world and the mystically supernatural world.

One day, he is entrusted to protect a young girl whose entire family was murdered. Taking her as his sister, Jason tries to lead a life that's as normal as possible in the most technologically advanced city in the world, Sanctuary. However his newfound freedom is threatened when his past comes to haunt him, and his hunger to join the extraordinary life once more begins to consume him. As enemies from both the worlds of supernatural and science come crashing down upon him, Jason must make a choice, and choose which life he'd rather have. An uneventful, normal life. Or the life of the impossible, where dog eats dog, and only the strongest survive.

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Warning: Contains violence, mutilation, swearing, and sexual scenes.

Authors Note: This novel is tagged as a harem, so expect multiple love interests and several fangirls ogling the MC.

This book is Copyright © 2019 by Drakonous, all rights reserved.

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A darker kind of mahouka

It's basically the same setup, a brother who is the god of war and death, and a sister who is a hopeless brothercon and also secretly pretty stronk. He then becomes a teacher (as opposed to student) at her school, and is so dashingly handsome (no joke, this is how it's written) that all the little schoolgirl hearts fall the moment they see him. In fact it's so bad that when they first see him, they literally flock to him like a group of dogs would flock to someone holding their brand of candy.

All the girls want him, even his sister secretly wants him, all her friends want him, all the female teachers want him, all the other women want him, in fact, all the women in the story basically want him. It's like he's been cursed with such beauty that everyone instantly loves him, now instead of getting sick of it like C.C. he has a history of fucking like a rabbit.

So yeah, this story is a bit heavy on the harem side, perhaps a bit too heavy.

Not to mention that every third chapter or so is a side story/flashback about how he fucked some other girl. And then there was an awful lot of murder in-between the fuckenings, but our protagonist is as good at killing as he is at breathing, he is legitimately the #2 ranked assassin/mercenary/killingmachine of the world, with #1 being the actual grim reaper, so as far as humans go, he's really #1. Killing sprees don't take him that long.

So this story is just a boatload of sci-fi killing sprees with some fucking in-between.

Honestly, I think the story of his rise would have been a more interesting read, instead of all these side stories and flashbacks that break the pacing of this story, what I think the author should really have done is write a prequel. I mean if he's really making this many side stories, it's eventually gonna end up amounting to a whole book's worth of text anyways (it's probably already close in fact, like 200+ pages maybe)

Now the low style score is because the story is written more like a script than a novel (author even admitted that this is what he's doing). As for the character score, I mean yeah, read the entirety of the above text and you will know why I gave it a bad character score, every girl is the same character and most of the men are two bit villains or nobodies.

As for the story, well it's not as bad as I've made it sound, the worldbuilding is at least mildly interesting for one, and although the author is taking his sweet ass time about it, there are some interesting main and sub plots going on too.

But for whatever reason, when I reached chapter 28 (or rather the yet another side story after chapter '20') I just kinda stopped reading and I have not picked it up since.

If you were to ask me why, I can't really give you a reason, not one that I'm sure about, but it's probably that this seems like kind of an important side story that I'd want to read, at the same time as I want it to just go away so I can get on with the main plot and those conflicting emotions resulted in some kind of reading paralysis where I just quit.

For as long as Jason can remember, he has been a killer. Raised as a child soldier, he was trained in the arts of murder as a mercenary, an assassin, and a bodyguard. In short, his life was anything but dull. Yet his greatest wish was to live a normal life. Go to school, date a normal girl, have a moment to breathe and relax. His wish was to be a normal boy, no, a real boy and not some weapon. But his thirst for strength led him to the path of both the scientifically psychic world and the mystically supernatural world.

Determined to meet this mythical creature and make a wish of his own, Peter decided to embark on an extraordinary journey. Using the guide provided in the book, Peter followed a series of cryptic clues that led him through dense forests, treacherous mountains, and vast stretches of open fields. Along the way, he encountered various obstacles and challenges that tested his courage and determination. However, fueled by his unwavering belief in magic, Peter overcame each hurdle with a sense of wonder and optimism. After days of relentless searching, Peter finally arrived at the Cave of Enchantment, which was said to be the dwelling place of the pbelpe. As he cautiously entered the cave, Peter felt an overwhelming sense of mysticism and wonder. Gradually, a faint glow surrounded him, and a soft voice echoed through the air, welcoming him. Face to face with the pbelpe, Peter could hardly contain his excitement. With newfound confidence, he made a heartfelt wish - he wished for peace and harmony to prevail throughout the world. As he finished uttering his wish, a magical surge pulsed through his body, and he felt an immense energy engulfing him. To his surprise, the pbelpe smiled warmly and declared that Peter's wish had been granted. From that day forward, Peter's village of Silvester, as well as the surrounding lands, flourished with peace and harmony. The people of Silvester lived in blissful tranquility, grateful for the magic that had touched their lives. As time went on, Peter shared the story of his miraculous journey and the power of belief with everyone he met. The tale of Silvester and the magic pbelpe became a legend passed down from generation to generation, reminding people of the wonders that can be achieved through a pure heart and unwavering faith. And so, the young boy named Peter forever remained a hero in the hearts and minds of the people of Silvester, with his remarkable journey serving as a testament to the power of magic and the extraordinary possibilities that lie within each and every one of us..

Reviews for "The Thrilling Adventures of Silvester and the Enigmatic Pbelpe"

1. Jane - 2 stars

I recently read "Silvester and the Magic Pbelpe" and unfortunately, I was quite disappointed. The story felt disjointed and confusing, making it difficult for me to follow along. The characters lacked depth, and their motivations were unclear. Additionally, the writing style was dry and lacked any sort of excitement or engagement. Overall, I found it hard to connect with the story and ultimately, it left me unsatisfied as a reader.

2. Mark - 1 star

I found "Silvester and the Magic Pbelpe" to be a complete waste of time. The plot was uninteresting and predictable. It seemed like the author was trying to pack too many ideas into one book, resulting in a messy and convoluted storyline. The prose was bland and uninspiring, failing to create any emotional connection with the characters. Overall, I regretted picking up this book and would not recommend it to anyone looking for a captivating read.

3. Emily - 2 stars

While the premise of "Silvester and the Magic Pbelpe" sounded promising, the execution fell flat. The writing style was awkward and stilted, making it difficult for me to immerse myself in the story. The pacing was also inconsistent, with long stretches of boredom followed by rushed and unresolved plot points. The world-building felt underdeveloped, leaving me with more questions than answers. Unfortunately, this book did not live up to my expectations and left me feeling unsatisfied.

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