The Pagan autumnal equinox, also known as Mabon, is a festival celebrated by some modern Pagan and Wiccan communities. It is typically observed around September 21st or 22nd in the Northern Hemisphere and March 21st or 22nd in the Southern Hemisphere, when the day and night are of equal length. Mabon is seen as a time of balance and a time to give thanks for the abundance of the harvest. It is also seen as a time to honor the changing seasons and the turning of the wheel of the year. During this festival, Pagans often engage in rituals and ceremonies to celebrate the harvest and to connect with nature. One common tradition during Mabon is the creation of a harvest altar.
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One common tradition during Mabon is the creation of a harvest altar. This altar is typically adorned with symbols of the season, such as corn, apples, and wheat, as well as candles and other offerings. It is a place where individuals can reflect on the blessings of the year and give thanks for the abundance in their lives.
Review of Witch King by Martha Wells: I never read The Murderbot Diaries and, after reading the Witch King, I probably never will
I never read The Murderbot Diaries and, after reading the Witch King, I probably never will.
The book opens with Kaiisteron, Prince of the Fourth House of the underearth (aka Witch King) waking up as a spirit around a year after his latest mortal body has been assassinated. After finding a new mortal body, Kai must find out who betrayed him and his friends, and what happened during the time he was unconscious.
Now, some books are really good at dropping you off in the middle of the action and letting you piece together what’s going on along the way. A good example of this would be Glen Cook’s Black Company or its successor, the Malazan Book of the Fallen by Steven Erikson.
If we were to say that such stories hit the ground running, then, by comparison, what Witch King does is hit the ground and—after taking a minute to take in its surroundings—decide that maybe staying down here isn’t such a bad idea after all.
Let me demonstrate the trajectory of my enthusiasm for this book:
When Tor first announced that Martha Wells was going to publish a new fantasy novel, I was instantly hooked. And for all good reasons: the Murderbot series has a lot of fans who swear by it; good fantasy standalones are rare yet very rewarding; the book is called Witch King and the cover art by Cynthia Sheppard is really amazing. All in all, it seemed like it could be a great entry point for me to start enjoying Martha Wells’ work.
So I asked Tor to send me a review copy and—after some minor complications—I finally received it early this January (thank you for that, Tor!). I was reading the Black Company at the time and I quickly finished it, excited to dive right into the Witch King. Except I didn’t dive in.
Excruciatingly. And frustratingly. Slowly.
To read the Witch King is to test how much one is willing to put up with. And after reading a good chunk of it, I decided that not a single thing about this book is worth giving it any more of my time. You may have noticed that I haven’t told you a single thing about the plot beyond the book’s opening. That is because, after reading for a good while, there isn’t one concrete thing I can tell you about it. It seems to me that the writing is purposefully vague and obfuscating to the point of it being legitimately frustrating.
The book seems to be made up entirely out of placeholder text, like the first draft of a writer who doesn’t have the faintest idea of the direction they want for their story. And as such, it is impossible for me to immerse myself in it and to feel grounded. The fact that my early review copy doesn’t have a map in it didn’t help either (although even after seeing the map, I am surprised by how vague it manages to be; kudos for sticking to the theme!).
Yes, sure, there are characters in Witch King. And they are moving from one place to another and there are some descriptions of what those places look like (though not enough to ground you in the world of course) and what the characters are doing. But they’re not really doing anything.
Now, there are a ton of other things that I could talk about here like:
- the fact that there is a huge dramatis personae at the beginning of the book where half the characters have these long dramatic titles and it is completely useless;
- the fact that really simple things like a period of half a year is called half a season round (Really?? Things like this only serve to pull readers out of the story with how stupid they sound.);
- why would you give your protagonist a dramatic name like Kaiisteron if everyone is just going to refer to him by a cutesy name like Kai?
- why would you call your main character a demon and give him the title of Witch King if you’re just gonna pull back and say that those things don’t really have negative connotations in your world?
- why oh why call it underearth when you can simply call it underworld?
- and a myriad of other things.
…but what would be the point of that?
I just don’t think it’s worth it.
Finally, when I got too fed up to continue reading, I jumped to Goodreads to see what other people thought about it (seldom a good idea). I really wanted to see if there were any like-minded people who powered through and found that the book has redeeming qualities that made it worth reading. But unfortunately, I found several people who mentioned that the problems I encountered persist throughout the book. It was at this point that I knew that deciding not to finish the book was the right decision.
All in all, I’m really thankful for the early review copy of the Witch King, as this way, I didn’t have to spend my own money on a book that is a complete waste of time.
Witch King by Martha Wells is expected to be published on May 30, 2023, and if you were thinking of getting it yourself, hopefully, this review has persuaded you to find a better way to spend your money.
EDIT: just wanted to clarify a few things really quickly. Someone asked how much did I read before deciding to DNF. I read about a third of the book. Some people think that the fact that I didn't finish it makes my opinion not valid, and to that I say, if I stopped watching a movie or a TV show because I was bored out of my mind, I would still share that information with someone asking about said movie or a TV show. I presented criticism and reasons for why I thought that the book was not worth reading. You still can read it though. It comes out on May 30, check it out, I hope you like it. If you read it, let me know, I'm curious to hear about it. Another thing is that people really don't like the first line where I mentioned that I will not read Murderbot. There's a couple of things I want to note here. While this was intended to be a controversial sentence that will hook you in and make you interested in reading the review, it is not disrespectful of the Murderbot. I never mentioned that Murderbot was bad. It's simply the fact that Martha Wells is immensely liked and popular due to it, and this book really didn't turn out well. Additionally, someone mentioned that the review was good but that I should've ommited that line because it's disrespectful. But my point is this: This was a standalone that could well have served to introduce someone to Martha Wells' writing and make them want to read more of her stuff. Based on this experience alone, I would never read Murderbot. Now there are a lot of comments saying that Murderbot is awesome and people are also saying that her stuff is hit or miss, so I understand that the series might still be worth checking out. Finally, while I'm glad reading my review got you to feel something, I'm not thrilled that those emotions are negative. Cheers!
Another common practice during Mabon is the performing of rituals that focus on balance and harmony. These rituals may involve meditation, chanting, or the casting of spells to promote peace and wellbeing. They are often held outdoors, allowing participants to connect with the natural world and to honor the changing of the seasons. Mabon is also a time for feasting and sharing with loved ones. Many Pagan communities come together to have a communal meal, often featuring foods that are traditional to the harvest season, such as squash, pumpkins, and apples. Overall, the Pagan autumnal equinox, or Mabon, is a time for Pagans and Wiccans to celebrate the harvest, give thanks for the abundance in their lives, and honor the changing of the seasons. It is a time to connect with nature and to find balance and harmony in one's life..
Reviews for "Connecting with the Elementals: Invoking Earth, Air, Fire, and Water during the Pagan Autumn Equinox"
1. Emily - 2 stars
I was really disappointed with "Pwgan autumnsl equinox". The plot was convoluted and confusing, with too many characters and subplots to keep track of. The pacing was also incredibly slow, and I found myself losing interest halfway through. Additionally, the writing style was dry and lacked any sort of emotional depth. Overall, I wouldn't recommend this book to anyone looking for a compelling and engaging read.
2. Michael - 1 star
I honestly don't understand the hype around "Pwgan autumnsl equinox". The storyline was predictable and cliché, and I found myself rolling my eyes at the constant use of tired tropes. The characters were one-dimensional and lacked any sort of development, making it difficult to connect or care about their fates. The dialogue was also stilted and unrealistic, which further pulled me out of the story. In my opinion, this book is not worth the time or money.
3. Sarah - 2 stars
I had high hopes for "Pwgan autumnsl equinox", but unfortunately, it fell flat for me. The writing was verbose and filled with unnecessary description, taking away from the overall narrative. The world-building was also confusing and poorly explained, making it difficult to fully immerse myself in the story. Additionally, the ending felt rushed and left many loose ends unresolved. I was left feeling unsatisfied and underwhelmed by this book.